Task 38.2

Writing · Variant 12

Comment on the Data & Give Your Opinion
Editorial cinematic scene of young people celebrating coming of age — joyful group at a festive party with warm golden lights, confetti and elegant decorations
Coming of Age Celebrations in Zetland
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Task 38.2

Imagine that you are doing a project on how young Zetlanders would prefer to celebrate coming of age. You have found some data on the subject — the results of a survey conducted among young Zetlanders (see the pie chart below).

Comment on the survey data and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

The survey question:
How would you prefer to celebrate your coming of age?
Choose one option
Survey: How would you prefer to celebrate your coming of age? 46% 21% 17% 9% 7%
  • A party with friends
  • A family dinner
  • Attending a special ceremony
  • Going on a trip
  • No special way
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Target: 200–250 words across all paragraphs
Paragraph 1 of 5
Opening statement — introduce the topic. Name what the survey is about and where it was conducted. Do not give data yet.
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The survey I came across As part of my project, The data reveals that According to a recent survey,
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Paragraph 2 of 5
Report 2–3 facts from the chart. Mention the most and least popular ways to celebrate. Use precise percentages.
Reporting language — tap to insert:
According to the survey, The chart shows that It is worth noting that Interestingly, The majority of respondents
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Paragraph 3 of 5
1–2 comparisons + your comment. Compare two options and explain why you find the result surprising or expected.
Comparison language — tap to insert:
In comparison, While … , Compared to …, This is somewhat surprising because On the other hand,
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Outline a problem + suggest a solution. Identify a real challenge that can arise with coming-of-age celebrations. Then propose one practical way to address it.
Problem–solution language — tap to insert:
One significant challenge is A common problem students face is To tackle this issue, A possible solution would be to This could be resolved by
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Conclusion — state your opinion on whether coming of age is different from other birthdays. Give a personal view and justify it briefly.
Concluding language — tap to insert:
To sum up, In my opinion, All things considered, I firmly believe that It goes without saying that
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