Task 38.1
Essay Writing · Survey Comment
Comment on Data & Give Your Opinion
Valentine's Day Presents — What Do Zetlanders Receive Most Often?
Survey-Based Essay · 200–250 words · 5 Paragraphs
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Task 38.1 · Variant 17
Imagine that you are doing a project on the most popular Valentine's Day presents in Zetland. You have found some data on the subject — the results of a survey conducted among Zetlanders (see the table below).
Comment on the survey data and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
The survey question: What Valentine's Day present do you receive most often?
Choose one option
| Options | Number of respondents (%) |
|---|---|
| Flowers | |
| Sweets | |
| Perfume | |
| Tickets to the cinema or theatre | |
| Gift certificates |
Write 200–250 words. Use the following plan:
- make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
- select and report 2–3 facts;
- make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
- outline a problem that can arise with choosing a present and suggest a way of solving it;
- conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the best present for Valentine's Day.
Part 1 of 5 — Opening Statement
Introduce the topic. State the subject of your project: the most popular Valentine's Day presents in Zetland. Mention the survey briefly.
Tap a phrase to insert it:
Valentine's Day is one of the most celebrated occasions in Zetland,
Choosing the right present for Valentine's Day can be a real challenge.
A recent survey among Zetlanders investigated
This project focuses on
As part of a project on Valentine's Day gifts,
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Part 2 of 5 — Key Facts from the Survey
Report 2–3 specific facts from the data. Use percentages from the table. Mention the most and least popular answers.
Facts you can use — pick 2 or 3
37% said they receive flowers most often — the most popular Valentine's Day gift.
25% most frequently receive sweets — the second most common present.
Only 8% receive gift certificates — the least popular option in the survey.
20% receive perfume as their Valentine's Day present.
10% most often receive tickets to the cinema or theatre.
Useful phrases — tap to insert:
According to the survey,
The results show that
The majority of respondents (37%)
Notably,
It is worth mentioning that
At the other end of the scale,
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Part 3 of 5 — Comparisons & Comments
Compare 1–2 pairs of results and add your comment. Why might people prefer one gift over another? Are any results surprising?
Comparison ideas
Flowers (37%) vs. gift certificates (8%) — classic romantic gifts clearly dominate over practical ones.
Sweets (25%) vs. tickets (10%) — consumable, affordable presents are twice as popular as experience-based gifts.
Perfume (20%) vs. gift certificates (8%) — a thoughtfully chosen item beats a generic voucher.
Comparison starters — tap to insert:
Compared to flowers,
While 37% receive flowers,
This is perhaps because
In contrast,
Interestingly,
It seems that traditional gifts are still highly valued,
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Part 4 of 5 — Problem & Solution
Outline a problem that can arise with choosing a present and suggest a realistic way to solve it.
Problem & solution ideas
Problem: it can be difficult to know a person's preferences, leading to an unsuitable or unwanted gift.
Problem: popular gifts like flowers or perfume may be too expensive for people on a tight budget.
Problem: some people are allergic to flowers or certain ingredients in sweets, making standard gifts unsuitable.
Solution: ask a close friend or family member about the recipient's tastes before buying.
Solution: choose a personalised, handmade gift that shows thought and care without high cost.
Problem / solution phrases — tap to insert:
One major challenge is
A significant problem with
However, this could be solved by
One possible solution would be
To overcome this,
People could avoid this by
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Part 5 of 5 — Conclusion
Give and explain your opinion on the best present for Valentine's Day. What makes a gift truly special? Does it have to be expensive or traditional?
Closing phrases — tap to insert:
In conclusion,
To sum up,
I strongly believe that
In my opinion, the best Valentine's Day present is one that
What truly matters is
Ultimately, any gift given with sincerity
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Vocabulary — key words & phrases