Task 38.1

Essay Writing · Survey Comment

Comment on Data & Give Your Opinion
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Valentine's Day Presents — What Do Zetlanders Receive Most Often?
Survey-Based Essay · 200–250 words · 5 Paragraphs
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Task 38.1 · Variant 17

Imagine that you are doing a project on the most popular Valentine's Day presents in Zetland. You have found some data on the subject — the results of a survey conducted among Zetlanders (see the table below).

Comment on the survey data and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

The survey question: What Valentine's Day present do you receive most often?
Choose one option
Options Number of respondents (%)
Flowers
37
Sweets
25
Perfume
20
Tickets to the cinema or theatre
10
Gift certificates
8

Write 200–250 words. Use the following plan:

  • make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
  • select and report 2–3 facts;
  • make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
  • outline a problem that can arise with choosing a present and suggest a way of solving it;
  • conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the best present for Valentine's Day.
200–250 words
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Target: 200–250 words across all parts
Part 1 of 5 — Opening Statement
Introduce the topic. State the subject of your project: the most popular Valentine's Day presents in Zetland. Mention the survey briefly.
Tap a phrase to insert it:
Valentine's Day is one of the most celebrated occasions in Zetland, Choosing the right present for Valentine's Day can be a real challenge. A recent survey among Zetlanders investigated This project focuses on As part of a project on Valentine's Day gifts,
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Part 2 of 5 — Key Facts from the Survey
Report 2–3 specific facts from the data. Use percentages from the table. Mention the most and least popular answers.
Facts you can use — pick 2 or 3
37% said they receive flowers most often — the most popular Valentine's Day gift.
25% most frequently receive sweets — the second most common present.
Only 8% receive gift certificates — the least popular option in the survey.
20% receive perfume as their Valentine's Day present.
10% most often receive tickets to the cinema or theatre.
Useful phrases — tap to insert:
According to the survey, The results show that The majority of respondents (37%) Notably, It is worth mentioning that At the other end of the scale,
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Part 3 of 5 — Comparisons & Comments
Compare 1–2 pairs of results and add your comment. Why might people prefer one gift over another? Are any results surprising?
Comparison ideas
Flowers (37%) vs. gift certificates (8%) — classic romantic gifts clearly dominate over practical ones.
Sweets (25%) vs. tickets (10%) — consumable, affordable presents are twice as popular as experience-based gifts.
Perfume (20%) vs. gift certificates (8%) — a thoughtfully chosen item beats a generic voucher.
Comparison starters — tap to insert:
Compared to flowers, While 37% receive flowers, This is perhaps because In contrast, Interestingly, It seems that traditional gifts are still highly valued,
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Part 4 of 5 — Problem & Solution
Outline a problem that can arise with choosing a present and suggest a realistic way to solve it.
Problem & solution ideas
Problem: it can be difficult to know a person's preferences, leading to an unsuitable or unwanted gift.
Problem: popular gifts like flowers or perfume may be too expensive for people on a tight budget.
Problem: some people are allergic to flowers or certain ingredients in sweets, making standard gifts unsuitable.
Solution: ask a close friend or family member about the recipient's tastes before buying.
Solution: choose a personalised, handmade gift that shows thought and care without high cost.
Problem / solution phrases — tap to insert:
One major challenge is A significant problem with However, this could be solved by One possible solution would be To overcome this, People could avoid this by
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Part 5 of 5 — Conclusion
Give and explain your opinion on the best present for Valentine's Day. What makes a gift truly special? Does it have to be expensive or traditional?
Closing phrases — tap to insert:
In conclusion, To sum up, I strongly believe that In my opinion, the best Valentine's Day present is one that What truly matters is Ultimately, any gift given with sincerity
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